Rewrites are tricky things, yo.
The gist of the original plotline is indeed still here, but better clarified/streamlined with more thought put into them aside from “over the couple of hours I drew them in, going off a loose outline I’d prepped”.
The next couple pages though, those I’m still sussing out in my head on account of needing to streamline exposition/fix some logic/plot holes.
Could I have just done the first draft verbatim? Probably, yeah. But then I’d be no better than Harper Lee’s current legal representation in how they’re exploiting her not-published-for-decades early drafts as a cash grab.
In any case, looking forward to when I eventually get around to posting my OTHER annuals, done after I’d better got the hang of a 24 hour thing. But first this one.